Or maybe this book's quality is being overblown because it caters to a very specific kink for like 20 minutes. I really dont understand the good review on this book, i feel like maybe I'm not reading the same book. The Erotic scenes were well done but they weren't nearly good enough to have to slog through this boring book for. The majority of the book is sugary sweet and fluffy so maybe that scene was intended to give variety? I don't understand, it was like reading a completely different book with no preparation or attempt to phase the reader into it. It felt like the author was desperately trying to get the reader to feel tension. I cared about everyones safety but it oh most felt just, too sudden, absolutely no build up or expectations happened the action just sorta happened. None of the plot felt like it came naturally and really made this difficult to want to keep reading. It was poor writing and there needed to be some better tools to get a reader to care otherwise it felt too plugged in. That invader scene just comes out of nowhere, has no context to back up why its happening and was paced so weird that i was so detached from what was going on. And some of the forced drama towards the end. I was really annoyed though at the middle of the book for that oddly placed invader scene. The tentacle and mpreg goodies was enjoyable.
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